Talk:Koi... Mil Gaya/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 15:50, 11 June 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 15:50, 11 June 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Non-free use rationale looks good.
• "It starred" → "It stars" (MOS:TENSE)

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 23:03, 16 June 2021 (UTC)

• "written by Rakesh Roshan, who wrote" sounds weird. maybe "conceived by"?

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 23:03, 16 June 2021 (UTC)

• Add a comma after "49th Filmfare Awards".

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 23:03, 16 June 2021 (UTC)

Plot and cast

• The plot section is 550 words so it passes WP:FILMPLOT.
• "paralyse" → "paralyze" (consistency)

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 00:02, 18 June 2021 (UTC)

• "one of their group behind" → "a group member behind" or "a member of their group behind"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 00:02, 18 June 2021 (UTC)

• That's everything I could find in the plot section. #Cast looks good as well.

Production and soundtrack

• "Zinta was given with the role" → "Zinta was given the role"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 00:17, 18 June 2021 (UTC)

• "Rakesh Roshan recommended her to play" → "Rakesh Roshan recommended she play"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 00:17, 18 June 2021 (UTC)

• "finished writing of the film's screenplay" → "finished writing the film's screenplay"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 00:17, 18 June 2021 (UTC)

• Couldn't find any major issues in #Soundtrack.

Release and reception

• Marketing and release can be their own section.

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 00:18, 18 June 2021 (UTC)

• You can also move #Box_office over #Critical_response.

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 00:18, 18 June 2021 (UTC)

• #Accolades is short enough to also become a subsection.

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 00:18, 18 June 2021 (UTC)

Legacy and sequel

• Section title: Sequel → Sequels

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 00:18, 18 June 2021 (UTC)

References

• All archivable sources are archived.
• Mark references from The Hindu with "|url-access=subscription".

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 00:18, 18 June 2021 (UTC)

Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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