Talk:Kill the Alligator and Run/GA1

GA Review

Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch

Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 03:25, 11 August 2012 (UTC)

• Lede: Link animated
  • Done. Theleftorium ^(talk) 16:40, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
• Lede: Link sitcom
  • Done. Theleftorium ^(talk) 16:40, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
• Lede: Add "television" between animated and sitcom
  • Done. Theleftorium ^(talk) 16:40, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
• Lede: Only Fox should be linked, not network
  • Done. Theleftorium ^(talk) 16:40, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
• Lede: To calm him down, the Simpson family → To calm him down, Homer and the rest of the Simpson family
  • Done. Theleftorium ^(talk) 16:40, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
• Plot: I don't think "insane" is a word for Wikipedia. Lol. Perhaps change it.
  • Yeah it is, Insanity. Theleftorium ^(talk) 16:40, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
• Plot: The Simpsons → Simpson family
  • "The Simpsons" is better here because I use "they" later in the sentence, and it sounds better than "it". Theleftorium ^(talk) 16:40, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
• Production: 1999–2000 should be 1999–00, as per WP:YEAR
  • I'd prefer not, since "2000" starts with "20" and not "19". Theleftorium ^(talk) 16:40, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
• Production: Link 1999–2000 to the US TV schedule here.
  • Done. Theleftorium ^(talk) 16:40, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
• Production: "The Simpsons producer Ian Maxtone-Graham directed Bader". Show the producer directed him? Haha; lol.
  • I don't understand what you mean... Theleftorium ^(talk) 16:40, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
• Production: #1 should be No. 1, as per WP:POUND
  • Done. Theleftorium ^(talk) 16:40, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
• Production: I'd consider paraphrasing. Too many quotes in production
  • I disagree, there's hardly any quotes at all. Theleftorium ^(talk) 16:40, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
• Release: Only Fox should be linked, not network
  • Done. Theleftorium ^(talk) 16:40, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
• Release: on the box set → in the box set
  • Done. Theleftorium ^(talk) 16:40, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
• References: Ref. 14 — About.com is not a good source. Thus, it should be removed.
  • In some cases About.com is not a good source, in this case it is as the article was written by Nancy Basile. Theleftorium ^(talk) 16:40, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
• External links: TV.com link?
  • Done. Theleftorium ^(talk) 16:40, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
• External links: Categories below should be sorted in alphabetical order please.
  • Done. Theleftorium ^(talk) 16:40, 19 August 2012 (UTC)

Overall; a great article. In good shape, I will be happy to pass as soon as the above concerns are fixed. Thanks, TBrandley 15:51, 19 August 2012 (UTC)

• Thanks for the review! :) Theleftorium ^(talk) 16:40, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
  • Okay; looks good. I'll pass the article for GA. TBrandley 16:41, 19 August 2012 (UTC)