Talk:Kenya at the 2002 Winter Olympics/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 06:46, 2 August 2018 (UTC)Reply

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

"They have competed at most Summer Olympic Games since then" - get rid of then
"consisted of one cross-country skier, Philip Boit. Boit had also" - try not to have the sentences start and end like this
"As the only participant for Kenya, he was selected as" - try As his country's only participant, Boit was selected as

"scouted by American sportswear company Nike, Inc.," - think having just Nike will suffice here
"This ranked him 77th for the event, and only the top 60 were allowed to proceed to the second 10 kilometre freestyle portion of the event" - reptition of event
"Only the top 16 finishers were advanced to the quarterfinals" - remove were

Reference 7 is misssing Associated Press as the agency that provided the story to The Seattle Times

That all I have. Will put this review on hold for the time being. MWright96 (talk) 07:23, 2 August 2018 (UTC)Reply

Everything addressed, thanks for the review! Courcelles (talk) 07:36, 2 August 2018 (UTC)Reply
- @Courcelles: Nice quick response. Can now gladly promote this to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 07:44, 2 August 2018 (UTC)Reply