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Reviewer: LunaEatsTuna (talk · contribs) 00:34, 1 May 2023 (UTC)
- Looks interesting! Will get to this within seven days. ツ LunaEatsTuna (💬)— 00:34, 1 May 2023 (UTC)
- Nice work on another station! Pass. ツ LunaEatsTuna (💬)— 17:51, 3 May 2023 (UTC)
Copyvio edit
Earwig says good to go.
Files edit
Good to go; KTXH 2018 Logo.svg has a valid non-free use rationale; KTXH logo late 2006.svg is on Commons and has a valid public domain rationale; KRIVFox26Channel20StationHouston.JPG was released into the public domain by the uploader on Commons.
Prose edit
- In the lead, wikilink independent station to Independent station (North America).
- "and CPI Subscription TV, subsidiary of cable" recommend adding a here. This is grammatically correct but with "a group led by" at the start of the sentence it sounds strange.
- "CPI exited the running," – running sounds a bit weird to me; is a better word choice available for is this a correct word usage in US-en?
- Perhaps wikilink majority stake and FM (in the first paragraph) for readers unfamiliar with their meanings.
- "broadcasting from studios at 8950 Kirby Drive." – what locality?
- "audience in the Houston metro," – recommend "Houston metropolitan area" for clarity.
- I doubt the further information template is necessary as Senior Road Tower can be wikilinked in the text itself.
- "giving it prime time hours to program" – wikilink prime time.
- Wikilink NBA.
- "place on Monday, December 6." – is the day of the week necessary?
- Wikilink guy-wire.
- The sentence starting "While orders were placed" is quite wordy with a lot of clauses; could it perhaps be split?
- "However, negotiations fell through" – do we know why?
- Unfortunately no.
- "several months at the FCC, which" – change acronym to "Federal Communications Commission (FCC)".
- "a 23-year-old Hannah Storm" – sounds slightly sensationalised, in a way. How about something along the lines of "at an early point in her career" etc.
- "purchase left TVX highly leveraged and highly vulnerable" – the same effect of the text could be achieved if the instances of highly were removed.
- If you pick up more TVX pages, you will find this phrasing (the section was first used at KTXA), so feel free to change it. This acquisition was the back-breaker for the company.
- Wikilink United Paramount Network instead of the acronym for consistency.
- "As part of its acquisition of the Chris-Craft stations" – wikilink if possible.
- Done. This section is identical to WDCA.
- Wikilink Warner Bros.
- "last season on the RSN" – RSN?
All issues fixed, LunaEatsTuna. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 04:44, 3 May 2023 (UTC)
- @Sammi Brie: Awesomesauce! I have left one last concern below than I should be able to approve this. ツ LunaEatsTuna (💬)— 15:38, 3 May 2023 (UTC)
References edit
Passes spotcheck on refs 5, 11, 25, 34, 47, 54 and 60.
- Ref 58 is not a reliable source unless Mike McGuff is a subject matter expert. From what I could find on his socials it seems he used to work at several stations but I am not sure if that is enough; that would not necessarily make him a reputable journalist on his own.
- @LunaEatsTuna: It's also the only source I can find on the whole internet that mentions the station's current branding. The reason I even left McGuff (I usually take him out) is because nobody else bothered. One thing I suffer from in covering the last 15 years is that newspaper coverage of media, as with newspapers themselves, has suffered badly. It might say something about how little-noticed these secondary stations are. Anyway, it's been removed. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 17:23, 3 May 2023 (UTC)
- Okay, thanks for letting me know. ツ LunaEatsTuna (💬)— 17:51, 3 May 2023 (UTC)
- @LunaEatsTuna: It's also the only source I can find on the whole internet that mentions the station's current branding. The reason I even left McGuff (I usually take him out) is because nobody else bothered. One thing I suffer from in covering the last 15 years is that newspaper coverage of media, as with newspapers themselves, has suffered badly. It might say something about how little-noticed these secondary stations are. Anyway, it's been removed. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 17:23, 3 May 2023 (UTC)
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.