Talk:Kʼinich Yat Ahk II/GA1
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Latest comment: 9 years ago by 3family6 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: 3family6 (talk · contribs) 15:46, 3 November 2014 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- "The monument was positioned on the upper terrace of Pyramid O-13, where, as Megan O'Neil notes, the living king would stood.[5]" - Would have stood.
- "Stela 15 is innovative, because it depicts the leader in the round, meaning it is almost a thee-dimensional sculpture." - This could be phrased better as "making it an almost three-dimensional sculpture.
- "These names are difficult to translate because they are unique as to what is found in the extant Mayan glyphic texts.[11]" - rewrite to something similar to "these names are difficult to translate because many are unique when compared to extant Mayan glyphic texts."--¿3family6 contribs 15:32, 10 November 2014 (UTC)
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- It is stable.
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall: Just needs some copy-edits.--¿3family6 contribs 15:32, 10 November 2014 (UTC)
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail: