Talk:Justina Szilágyi/GA1

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Borsoka in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 16:27, 20 February 2018 (UTC)Reply

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 16:27, 20 February 2018 (UTC)Reply

Criteria

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GA Criteria

GA Criteria:

  • 1
    1.a  Y
    1.b  Y
  • 2
    2.a  Y
    2.b  Y
    2.c  Y
    2.d  Y (Highest is 8.3%, due to incidental mirrors of phrases.)
  • 3
    3.a  Y
    3.b  Y
  • 4
    4.a  Y
  • 5
    5.a  Y
  • 6
    6.a  Y
    6.b  Y

Prose Suggestions

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  • Corvinus forced Pongrác to renounce the fortress of Sztrecsény (now Strečno) and the town of Zsolna (present-day Žilina), in exchange for Transylvanian estates, including Gernyeszeg who held it at the time? If Pongrác, I suggest you change renounce to surrender. If Corvinus, I suggest you change renounce to renounce his claim on
  • @Borsoka: That is all my suggestions, passing now. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 07:31, 22 March 2018 (UTC)Reply
Thank you for promoting the article. I changed the text in accordance with your above suggestion. Have a nice day. Borsoka (talk) 01:47, 23 March 2018 (UTC)Reply