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Hey! So I made some minor edits, italicized the film titles, made sure periods were before citations, some small grammar edits. It looks good though, the theme and style is very well laid out and has interesting information on her film Raw. Your table is also well down but I would add some citations to it. Also I think there needs to be a citation after where she went to university. Just after "...Torinofilm lab framework programme in 2013." You have four citations after Raw and I would just fix that as I don't think they are all supposed to be in that spot. I would also put all the critics on women in horror more together rather than spread throughout, so like in one paragraph rather than two. Other than that it is well laid out and you have good critical sources and the links to other films fits well within the article. Sunflowerroad (talk) 16:35, 3 November 2019 (UTC)Sunflowerroad November 3, 2019.