Talk:John Robert Boyle/GA1
Latest comment: 13 years ago by Nikkimaria in topic GA Review
GA Review edit
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Reviewer: Nikkimaria (talk) 13:09, 30 September 2010 (UTC)
Hello! I'll be reviewing this article for potential GA status. My review should be posted shortly. Cheers, Nikkimaria (talk) 13:09, 30 September 2010 (UTC)
- Looks good, passing as GA. Nikkimaria (talk) 13:47, 30 September 2010 (UTC)
Writing and formatting edit
- "taught school" - either be more specific as to which school or what type of school, or take out "school"
- "with whom he had either two[1] or three[2] children" - infobox says two
- Spell out numbers under 10
- What's a trunk line?
- Is the title Education Minister or Minister of Education?
- "which, contesting their first election" - check agreement
- Check hyphen use - see WP:HYPHEN
Accuracy and verifiability edit
- "he died February 15, 1936, on his way to Jamaica" - source for infobox saying he died in Ottawa?
- Journals in works cited should include page range for article
- Need accent on Mahé
Broad edit
No issues noted
Neutrality edit
- Some minor phrasing problems - be sure to maintain an encyclopedic tone at all times
Stability edit
No issues noted
Images edit
No issues noted