Talk:John Allen (RAF officer)/GA1
Latest comment: 4 months ago by Pickersgill-Cunliffe in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk · contribs) 22:57, 26 December 2023 (UTC)
Prelim edit
- Article is stable
- Images correctly licensed
- No duplicated links
- Earwig reports copyvio unlikely
Lede and infobox edit
- Link Second World War
- Link sortie
- Infobox says he was born on 2 July
Early life edit
- Is Laurance a spelling error?
Second World War edit
- Link Second World War
- "From mid-May" give the year
- Give Deere his rank
- "Messerschmitt Bf 109s fighters" sp
- "the destruction of which was observed"
- Link bail out
- Link scrambled
- "Allen is buried"
References edit
- References look good.
@Zawed: Hi, that's all I have for now. Will await your responses. Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 22:57, 26 December 2023 (UTC)
- @Pickersgill-Cunliffe: thanks for the review, much appreciated. I have responded as above. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 03:57, 27 December 2023 (UTC)
- @Zawed: Passing this article as satisfying the GA criteria. Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 00:14, 28 December 2023 (UTC)