Talk:Joey Jordison/GA3
Latest comment: 13 years ago by Cannibaloki in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Cannibaloki 04:45, 11 August 2010 (UTC)
Checklist edit
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
- Is it reasonably well written?
- A. Prose quality:
- B. MoS compliance:
- The lead section does not summarize the article correctly.
- A. Prose quality:
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. References to sources:
- B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- A. References to sources:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- While in the infobox has a list of genres, the article does not have a musical style section. What about a section to his playing techniques?
- B. Focused:
- There is a bit of negativity in the second paragraph of the Slipknot section.
- A. Major aspects:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Aside from "he's an amazing producer" without much explanation or relevance, everything looks okay.
- That's a critics view on his production, I don't understan how it's really bias.
- Aside from "he's an amazing producer" without much explanation or relevance, everything looks okay.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- The lack of a section describing Jordison's musical style is an open door for vandalism.
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- Overall:
Comments edit
- "...sometimes known by his number #1, but better known by his stage name Joey Jordison..." Why he is sometimes known by his number #1?
- Jason Arnopp explains that its because one of their logos is a barcode. I don't see why explaining it should be in the article, plus it doesn't say anything about Joey's number... (80)
- "He is a co-founder and the primary drummer for the Grammy Award-winning heavy metal band Slipknot..." He is the co-founder? Why primary drummer, there are two as in Kylesa? Is "Grammy Award-winning" necessary?
- The lead has been re-written.
- "He is considered one of the most dedicated members of the band and is involved in most elements of the band including writing, mixing and production..." Not according the source, which said "he co-handles production responsibilities on nearly every Slipknot release [...]".
- Done - I just deleted it.
- "Each member of Slipknot is assigned a number; Joey was assigned "#1"." Why?
- Explained in first comment.