Talk:Jesé/GA1

Latest comment: 8 years ago by Royroydeb in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Royroydeb (talk · contribs) 16:59, 12 February 2016 (UTC)Reply


  • The lead is short
  • "on 16 January 2011, he made his senior debut with the reserves" - senior debut with reserves?
  • The last line is also contradictory, the paragraph should be arranged properly.
  • Link Castilla, what is castilla?
  • " he was once again included in the list for the game against" - the heading of the section is Castilla
  • "in a position that did not exist in the main squad" - elucidate this matter man
  • " further four years late" - later
  • Champions League debut" - link it
  • links 26 27 are not working
  • "fine form" - remove fine
  • "His league form continued when " - ??
  • The third para of the 2013- present section use he instead of Jese
  • "netted his fifth in the final against Greece (1–0)" - in which level?
  • "which have been described as "exceptional"" - who described?
  • "Jesé's manager Carlo Ancelotti" - his personal manager?

You have one week to address them (till 22 February). RRD13 দেবজ্যোতি (talk) 08:39, 15 February 2016 (UTC)Reply

Cristianho19

12 days have passed and the issues have not been addressed. I am failing it. RRD13 দেবজ্যোতি (talk) 04:48, 27 February 2016 (UTC)Reply