Talk:Jeremy Lin/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 20:14, 20 April 2016 (UTC)

I shall be reviewing this against the GA criteria as part of a GAN sweep. I'll leave some comments soon. JAGUAR  20:14, 20 April 2016 (UTC)

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Checking against the GA criteria

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

   "out of high school and being undrafted out of Harvard University" - too many uses of "out of". Try undrafted from to mix things up

   "Lin is one of the few Asian Americans in NBA history, and the first American of Chinese or Taiwanese descent" - is he Chinese or Taiwanese or both?

   "Still, Lin played more relaxed on the road" - tad informal opening

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

   No original research found.

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

This meets the criteria as it is well written and comprehensive. I see no reason to put this on hold JAGUAR  10:28, 21 April 2016 (UTC)

I have to admit, this is not written by myself, I am just a nominator, I am not the major contributor of this article. 333-blue 11:51, 21 April 2016 (UTC)