Talk:Japanese destroyer Tachibana (1944)/GA1

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Hog Farm in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 16:50, 24 June 2020 (UTC)Reply

Criteria

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1. Prose   On hold

2. Verifiability  Pass

3. Depth of Coverage   On hold

4. Neutral  Pass

5. Stable  Pass

6. Illustrations  Pass - AGF on the sourcing for the creator of the schematic drawing.

7. Miscellaneous   On hold

Comments

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  • Prose has draft at 3.37 meters, infobox has 3.41
  • Prose says she was struck from the Navy List on 10 August 1945, infobox says 15 September 1945

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  • Nevitt indicates that the name translates to "Mandarin Orange", this might be worth adding.
  • Is the commander of the ship known? If so, that should be added.
    • I generally don't unless they're notable. And, AFAIK, this guy isn't.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 14:51, 26 June 2020 (UTC)Reply

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  • Add a short description


This one's a rather short article, but given that the ship was only in service for about 6 months and didn't do much besides sink, I don't see the length of this one as an issue. Placing on hold. Hog Farm (talk) 17:31, 25 June 2020 (UTC)Reply

All done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 14:51, 26 June 2020 (UTC)Reply
Article is not a COPYVIO, is well-sourced, is illustrated by relevant and properly licensed images, is neutral, stable, and passes the guidelines for prose. Passing. Hog Farm (talk) 20:57, 26 June 2020 (UTC)Reply