Talk:Jannik Hansen/GA1

Latest comment: 13 years ago by Leech44 in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: Mo Rock...Monstrous (leech44) 18:48, 17 February 2011 (UTC)Reply

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
    I changed the lead slightly. I eliminated the space between the introduction sentence and the second paragraph. I don't see a reason to separated the two and it eliminates a one sentence paragraph. I also made a light change later in the article where the word season was used twice in quick succession as I felt it was a little awkward. Other than those minor very things its a very good read and well pu together
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
    There is only one issue with the links. Reference #6 "Defense, goaltendering anchor of 2006–07" redirects to the Colts home page.
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
    All images contain proper licensing.
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Another solid article that I will pass once the redirecting link is taken care of.--Mo Rock...Monstrous (leech44) 18:48, 17 February 2011 (UTC)Reply

Done. Thanks for the review! Orlandkurtenbach (talk) 22:49, 17 February 2011 (UTC)Reply
No problem. I've passed the article. Good work.--Mo Rock...Monstrous (leech44) 02:56, 18 February 2011 (UTC)Reply