Talk:James Pascoe Group/GA1

Latest comment: 10 years ago by CorporateM in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: CorporateM (talk · contribs) 05:25, 12 October 2014 (UTC)Reply


I'll do this review. CorporateM (Talk) 05:25, 12 October 2014 (UTC)Reply

I'm not going to pass the article at this time, but I hope I provided some feedback that may lead to a strong second nomination in the future. CorporateM (Talk) 05:55, 12 October 2014 (UTC)Reply


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This article is on "James Pascoe Group" but it includes a lot of off-topic information, such as bios on its executives and dedicated sections about individual companies. Probably a list of companies with a summary would be best. The execs can have their own article if they are notable enough for one.CorporateM (Talk) 05:55, 12 October 2014 (UTC)Reply

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