Talk:James Hayter (RAF officer)/GA1
Latest comment: 9 months ago by Zawed in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 12:24, 10 July 2023 (UTC)
I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 12:24, 10 July 2023 (UTC)
- Images appropriately licensed
- Hyphenate short service, air raid shelter
- A bit too much detail in the lede, I think
- Tell readers what kind of aircraft a Vildebeest is
- No. 103 Squadron; this was one of ten Suggest deleting "this was" to tighten the sentence
- In the early life section, no need to link and provide the abbreviation again for Royal Air Force
- There are a fair number of links redundant to the lede scattered through out the article
- Performed < served ?
- Link St Lucien Ferme, sortie, dogfight, fighter sweep, Dekheila
- A few minor niggles, but up to your usual standard--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:27, 30 July 2023 (UTC)
- Hi Sturmvogel 66, thanks for looking at this. I have dealt with your various points as above. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 10:40, 4 August 2023 (UTC)