Talk:James Crichton (soldier)/GA1

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Zawed in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 01:26, 31 March 2018 (UTC)Reply


I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:26, 31 March 2018 (UTC)Reply

  • Images appropriately licensed.
  • No DABs, external links OK
  • He received limited schooling for by the age of 10, he was working in a coal mine Awkward, rephrase
  • quarter-master sergeant is the the proper spelling of this rank? Also, link it.
  • Link warrant officer, 2nd class and centenary.
  • officer training but a senior comma after training
  • His VC was the last to be won by a serviceman of the NZEF during the First World War.[7] Crichton's VC was the last to be won by a serviceman of the NZEF during the First World War.[7] Redundancy
  • He also married and with his wife would have one daughter. Awkward
  • If he got a service medal for the 2nd World War, then he must have served to earn it. What did he do during the war?
  • Do not just bold footnotes and citations, put them as proper lvl3 headers so they appear in the TOC.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:40, 12 April 2018 (UTC)Reply
@Sturmvogel 66: Thanks for the feedback, I have dealt with the identified issues. That was a good catch RE the WWII service medals, I had totally overlooked that. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 03:08, 13 April 2018 (UTC)Reply