Talk:Jack Rae/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 19:36, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:36, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

• No DABs
• Images properly licensed
• External links OK
• one of several pilots that flew Spitfires Several? There were 47 Spits between 601 and 603 Sqdns!
• Link aircraft carrier, forced landing, repatriated
• Spitfire Mk. Vs, which had cannons rather than machine guns. Rather simplistic statement about the differences. Better to just say that it was "improved" rather than get into the details about more powerful engine, better armament and strengthened structure, etc., IMO.
• American aircraft carrier USS Wasp You already told all this to the reader in the lede; shorten this
• As the war drew to a close, the POWs at Stalag Luft III were force marched deeper into Germany but was liberated by the advancing Allied forces near Hamburg at the end of the war. awkward
• His memoirs had been were--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 11:44, 17 October 2020 (UTC)

• Sturmvogel 66, thanks for the review. I have actioned these, my edits are here. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 07:59, 19 October 2020 (UTC)