Talk:Ja Morant/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 20:27, 1 February 2019 (UTC)Reply

Will take the time to review this entry. MWright96 (talk) 20:27, 1 February 2019 (UTC)Reply

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

"However, he gave up his basketball career" - how about ended instead?
Wikilink points, assists and rebounds to their respective articles for non-Basketball readers

"While looking for a snack, Kane spotted Morant" - noticed
Who exactly is Tevin Brown?
Wikilink three-on-three game to 3X3 basketball and scholarship to Athletic scholarship
"On September 3, 2016, Morant committed to Murray State" - committed to playing for

"with 11 points, 10 rebounds, and 14 assists in an 80–52 win over Eastern Illinois." - victory to ensure that both win and the former word have an equal number of mentions
Wikilink steal to Steal (basketball)
and in late January 2019 at least one outlet projected him as the first overall selection." - how about forecast to avoid close reptition of the same word?

References 23 and 26 are missing Associated Press as the news agency who provided the stories

Overall a neatly written article. Just some minor quibbles that need addressing. MWright96 (talk) 07:29, 3 February 2019 (UTC)Reply

@MWright96: I have addressed all issues. Wisestork (talk) 16:19, 3 February 2019 (UTC)Reply
- @Wisestork: Lovely. Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 20:48, 3 February 2019 (UTC)Reply