Talk:Iori Yagami/GA1
Latest comment: 15 years ago by S@bre in topic GA Review
GA Review
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GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
A few minor problems need to be resolved, but otherwise the article is fine.
- Is it reasonably well written?
- A. Prose quality:
In the lead section, it should be "ended up liking" as opposed to "ended liking". In the "attributes" section, you don't need to second "s" on the plural in "disregarding their clans's past"; " clans' " would be sufficient.
- B. MoS compliance:
In the "main series" subsection, the number "3" should be spelt out fully as "three". Likewise, in the reception section, "1st" should be spelt out fully as "first". As per WP:MOSNUM, numerals should only be used for double-digit numbers and above.
- A. Prose quality:
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. References to sources:
- B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
In the second sentence of the "creation" section, there is a quote: "broke the mold for characters in fighting games at that time". This should have an inline citation next to it, making it clear where the quote was retrieved from.
- C. No original research:
- A. References to sources:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- B. Focused:
- A. Major aspects:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
Fair use rationales are rather weak; having two images where the rationale is a "visual description" will get hit hard on by FAC reviewers. I'd highly recommend bolstering them, but they're just about suitable for this GA review.
- B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- Overall:
