Talk:Interstate 84 in Utah/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Imzadi1979 (talk · contribs) 02:44, 31 December 2013 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

   Just a few little comments below.

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

   Looks good.

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

   a caption for the map would be a good addition, otherwise all is good here.

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

   I'm passing since I'm confident that the prose will be touched up quickly. The comment about a future ACR hold though. Imzadi 1979 → 03:25, 31 December 2013 (UTC)

Lead

• "The highway enters Box Elder County near Snowville before becoming concurrent with I-15 in Tremonton before traveling south through Brigham City and Ogden." That could be split up or reworded to get rid of " ... before ... before ... "
  • Fixed. --AdmrBoltz 03:42, 31 December 2013 (UTC)

RD

• "This is expressed in terms of average annual daily traffic (AADT), a measure of traffic volume for any average day of the year." I've found it's better to just pipe a link in the next sentence along the lines of In 2012, UDOT calculated [[average annual daily traffic|on average]] that ..." than to try to add a quick explanation of AADT.
  • My personal preference is to spell it out a bit more clearly. --AdmrBoltz 03:43, 31 December 2013 (UTC)
• In general, there are some prose things I'd copy edit if this article were going to ACR, but for GA, I'm ok leaving them. I'll make an offer now to help c/e pre-ACR actually.