Talk:International Day of Yoga/GA1

Passed. 𝙳𝚛𝚎𝚊𝚖𝚁𝚒𝚖𝚖𝚎𝚛 ^{𝚍𝚒𝚜𝚌𝚞𝚜𝚜} 16:09, 3 October 2023 (UTC)Reply

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Reviewer: DreamRimmer (talk · contribs) 04:06, 24 September 2023 (UTC)Reply

Many thanks for taking this on. I'm used to working through comments from reviewers and will respond to any issues promptly. Looking forward to it! Chiswick Chap (talk) 06:31, 24 September 2023 (UTC)Reply

It's great to see your enthusiasm. I'll be sharing my comments soon. 𝙳𝚛𝚎𝚊𝚖𝚁𝚒𝚖𝚖𝚎𝚛 ^{𝚍𝚒𝚜𝚌𝚞𝚜𝚜} 08:07, 24 September 2023 (UTC)Reply

Good Article review progress box

Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Comments

Origin

Replace In 2015 Reserve Bank of India issued a 10 rupees commemorative coin to mark the International Day of Yoga. with In 2015, the Reserve Bank of India issued a 10-rupee commemorative coin to mark the International Day of Yoga.

Done.

UN Declaration

In the phrase "In Indian calendars," add "the" before "Indian".

Done.

In the third paragraph - Change "lauded" to "praised" for a more common synonym.

Done.

Change "the benefit of yoga" to "the benefit of yoga." for smoother phrasing.

Done.

In practice

In the first sentence, it's better to specify that "The first International Day of Yoga" was "celebrated" rather than "observed." While "observed" is not incorrect, the other term is more commonly used in this context.

Reception

You should replace "Modi" with "Prime Minister Modi" in some instances to provide more context.

Glossed the first instances in both text and image caption.

Reference

Please fix following cite parameters.

In |website=www.mea.gov.in, remove www.
In |publisher=Times of India, add "The" before Times of India.
In |agency=NDTV, replace "agency" parameter with "publisher".

Done all.

Please retain the three best sources out of the six references for "Similar days have been held in cities in India and around the world each year since then," and remove the other three.

Done.

Spot checks -

Ref. 3, fine Ref 7, fine Ref 16, good Ref 22, good Ref, 23, good

Neutral

Pass WP:NPOV.

Stable

It is stable.

Coverage

This article effectively covers all the essential aspects of the topic.

Images

All of the files have proper licensing and are relevant to the topic.

Copyright

According to Earwig, the article's text closely matches content from these sources:

img1.wsimg.com (92.8% similarity) --- gets File Not Found error
researchgate.net (75.0% similarity)
organiser.org (49.7% similarity) --- unable to add this as it is blocked by Wikipedia's Protection Filter
pib.gov.in (41.2% similarity)

It's clear that these portions have been copied from Wikipedia. Therefore, I recommend adding the {{Backwards copy}} template to the article's talk page.

Added that now. Chiswick Chap (talk) 15:17, 3 October 2023 (UTC)Reply

I don't see any other issues, so promoting it. 𝙳𝚛𝚎𝚊𝚖𝚁𝚒𝚖𝚖𝚎𝚛 ^{𝚍𝚒𝚜𝚌𝚞𝚜𝚜} 16:03, 3 October 2023 (UTC)Reply

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