Talk:Interlacing in The Lord of the Rings/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 01:50, 20 September 2021 (UTC)

Criteria

GA Criteria
GA Criteria: 1 1.a Y 1.b Y 2 2.a Y 2.b Y 2.c Y 2.d Y 3 3.a Y 3.b Y 4 4.a Y 5 5.a Y 6 6.a Y 6.b Y

• No DAB links Y
• No dead links Y
• No missing citations Y

Prose Suggestions

Please note that almost all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion. Any changes I deem necessary for the article to pass GA standards I will bold.

Applying the medieval technique

• The early reviewer William Blissett wrote in 1959 suggest mentioning that he reviewed it just four/five years after it was published.
  • Done.
• that the remark is witty but not really correct suggest that the remark is witty but not truly correct
  • Done.

Depth and openendedness

• what else was going on in Middle-earth at the same time suggest what else was occurred in Middle-earth at the same time
  • Done.

Translation to film

• how Jackson had done this suggest how Jackson achieved this
  • Done.

• @Chiswick Chap: That is all of my suggestions, passing now. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 03:36, 20 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Many thanks for the review. Chiswick Chap (talk) 09:02, 20 September 2021 (UTC)