Talk:Indy Autonomous Challenge
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Too many references edit
The article is well written, clear in its structures and with good images. A part from some small grammar and editing errors, I suggest only to reduce bibliography. It is too much also for a scientific paper, so as a consequence really too much for a wikipedia one. Natalia Pingaro (talk) 12:50, 7 July 2023 (UTC)
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thank you for your article, it was really interesting.
The article is well referenced in all section. As a personal stylistic opinion, there are some extremely long sentences that could be shortened.
Also, in my opinion the two tables with the results should be moved in a separate section after the main text. Fabiornati98 (talk) 12:52, 7 July 2023 (UTC)
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The article is well-written and explains the event in a detailed manner. I just made two minor corrections (typos). --mscuttari (talk) 14:25, 7 July 2023 (UTC)
Observations and suggestions for improvements edit
The following observations and suggestions for improvements were collected, following an expert review of the article within the Science, Technology, Society and Wikipedia course at the Politecnico di Milano, in July 2023.
Very good work! Further references to scientific papers on autonomous driving could be added for the interested readers, as well as links to similar Wikipedia pages, e.g., https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Self-driving_car.