Talk:Industry Bar/Archive 1
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Stephen Heighton
ResolvedThis article mentions Stephen Heighton. ---Another Believer (Talk) 02:06, 12 November 2020 (UTC)
- Ditto this one and this one ---Another Believer (Talk) 02:07, 12 November 2020 (UTC)
- We can definitely mention him—I did at Barracuda Lounge. Armadillopteryx 03:16, 12 November 2020 (UTC)
- I went ahead and added him here as well. Armadillopteryx 14:53, 12 November 2020 (UTC)
- Armadillopteryx, Thanks! ---Another Believer (Talk) 15:10, 12 November 2020 (UTC)
- I went ahead and added him here as well. Armadillopteryx 14:53, 12 November 2020 (UTC)
- We can definitely mention him—I did at Barracuda Lounge. Armadillopteryx 03:16, 12 November 2020 (UTC)
Description
I think the Description section could use some attention here—specifically, trimming some of the quotes, adding more info as regular text, and expanding with content from the NY Times source [1]. Does this sound reasonable? Armadillopteryx 13:32, 17 November 2020 (UTC)
- Armadillopteryx, Definitely! ---Another Believer (Talk) 14:44, 17 November 2020 (UTC)
- I made some edits to this end today. Armadillopteryx 01:40, 23 November 2020 (UTC)
- Armadillopteryx, Much appreciated! ---Another Believer (Talk) 02:40, 23 November 2020 (UTC)
- I made some edits to this end today. Armadillopteryx 01:40, 23 November 2020 (UTC)
Sources to sift through
https://newyork.gaycities.com/bars/300623-industry-barhttps://www.theinfatuation.com/new-york/reviews/industry-barhttps://www.nytimes.com/2017/02/28/style/gay-bars-broadway-nights-new-york-hells-kitchen.htmlhttps://www.theguardian.com/travel/2015/nov/05/gay-new-york-guide-clubs-bars-drag-cabaret-artshttps://gothamist.com/food/a-guide-to-nycs-gay-barshttps://www.gaytimes.co.uk/travel/new-york-city-the-big-trip/
Article name
Would it be better to use WP:NATURAL disambiguation and move this article to Industry Bar? I've just started the page for Barracuda, which is under the same ownership as this bar, and I chose to disambiguate by using the venue's longer but less common name (Barracuda Lounge) for the article. Maybe it would make sense to change one or the other name so they're self-consistent? I don't really mind either way. Armadillopteryxtalk 12:29, 21 May 2020 (UTC)
- Armadillopteryx, I don't have a strong preference for one or the other. Thanks for the creating the Barracuda page. ---Another Believer (Talk) 14:29, 21 May 2020 (UTC)
- Okay, I guess I'll move this one, then. Thanks. Armadillopteryxtalk 20:36, 21 May 2020 (UTC)
Expansion
I think I'm done expanding the article, so next time I get a minute, I want to go through the prose and tidy everything up. Might add a quote box in the Reception section if it can be made to fit with the layout. Armadillopteryx 22:31, 27 November 2020 (UTC)
Like ---Another Believer (Talk) 22:53, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
