Talk:Indonesia at the 1952 Summer Olympics/GA1

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 20:52, 27 May 2018 (UTC)

• I'll give this one a look-over momentarily. Courcelles (talk) 20:52, 27 May 2018 (UTC)

• Weblink in infobox doesn't work.

• Removed. HaEr48 (talk) 16:45, 28 May 2018 (UTC)

• "Eventually, the team did not win any medal." -> "The team did not win any medals."

• Done. HaEr48 (talk) 16:45, 28 May 2018 (UTC)

• "1945—1949)" en, not emdashes for date ranges.

• Done. HaEr48 (talk) 16:45, 28 May 2018 (UTC)

• "In 1951 Indonesia competed in the first Asian Games in 1951" Unless there were actually two Asian Games in 1951, one of those 1951's in the sentence needs to go.

• Done. HaEr48 (talk) 16:45, 28 May 2018 (UTC)

• Don't assume everyone knows what the IOC is. Even on an article like this.

• Done. HaEr48 (talk) 16:45, 28 May 2018 (UTC)

• The results would look better as tables under each event's description, see most other X at the yyyy Olympics GA's of late.

• Done. Thanks for the suggestion. HaEr48 (talk) 16:45, 28 May 2018 (UTC)

• Wikilink Weightlifting at the 1952 Summer Olympics somewhere.

• Done (in table). HaEr48 (talk) 16:45, 28 May 2018 (UTC)

• "he ran a time" Swam a time, perhaps?

• Done. HaEr48 (talk) 16:45, 28 May 2018 (UTC)

• No need to capitalise Heat Five.

• Done. HaEr48 (talk) 16:45, 28 May 2018 (UTC)

• ".[8][9][4]" Citations go in numerical order

• Done. HaEr48 (talk) 16:45, 28 May 2018 (UTC)

• ". His best completed lifts from each variants" No need for the s on variant.

• Done. HaEr48 (talk) 16:45, 28 May 2018 (UTC)

• The last three EL's seem to duplicate content from the various Sports Reference pages you've actually cited. Could lose them.

• Done. HaEr48 (talk) 16:45, 28 May 2018 (UTC)

• Images look fine, article is stable.

Courcelles (talk) 21:11, 27 May 2018 (UTC)

@Courcelles: Thanks for your review. I've updated the article, please take a look at my responses above. HaEr48 (talk) 16:45, 28 May 2018 (UTC)

Looks good. Will promote when I get home and off my phone. Courcelles (talk) 16:55, 28 May 2018 (UTC)