Talk:India at the 1964 Winter Olympics/GA1

Latest comment: 5 years ago by MWright96 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 10:34, 16 August 2018 (UTC)Reply

Will read this article and give comments soon. MWright96 (talk) 10:34, 16 August 2018 (UTC)Reply

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  


Background

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  • "The Indian Olympic Association was recognized by" - recognised
  • "a totla of 1,091 athletes took part, representing 36 National Olympic Committees." - a total of 1,091 athletes representing 36 National Olympic Committees took part.

Alpine skiing

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  • "and making his Olympic debut." - and was making his Olympic debut.
  • " moved there in the late 1940's" - should be 1940s per MOS:DECADE
  • "the gold medal was won by Egon Zimmermann of Austria , the silver" - get rid of the extra space before the comma

References

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  • Consider archiving Reference 3 like all the other citiations have been.

That's all from me in this review. Nothing too major to be addressed. MWright96 (talk) 12:30, 16 August 2018 (UTC)Reply