Talk:Imagining Mars: A Literary History/GA1

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: Frzzl (talk · contribs) 09:54, 23 August 2023 (UTC)Reply


Hi! I'd like to take up this review; I should be able to get some comments through in a few days. Frzzltalk;contribs 09:54, 23 August 2023 (UTC)Reply

Passing Frzzltalk;contribs 10:36, 25 August 2023 (UTC)Reply

Review edit

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
    Contents list is well done, article follows MOS well. One thing to ask - is every redlink here warranted? There sure are a lot... If (this article is excellently written) I have any points to raise on prose, they'll be listed below
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (inline citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):   d (copyvio and plagiarism):  
    Refs are formatted just fine, earwig comes up with 31%, pretty much just quotations from reviews. No evidence of OR found
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
    Article is focused, everything looks fine here.
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
    From my reading, the coverage/balance of reviews is fair; looks NPOV to me.
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
    no signs of an edit war, looks fine
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
    Only image is fair use, no probs
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Spotchecks edit

Sources I've checked - 1, 2 (got hold of it through my own library), 9, 10, 13.  Y happy that this article is well sourced.

Points edit

@TompaDompa:

  • can we change "a couple of reviewers", to "However, some reviewers" or something similar. The original is a bit informal.
  • does smorgasbord in Morissey's review need to be in quotations?
    • I don't know if it's necessary, but I've added quotation marks. TompaDompa (talk) 10:29, 25 August 2023 (UTC)Reply

That's it - this is the best written GAN I've ever seen :D