Talk:If We Are the Body/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: 0z (talk · contribs) 10:24, 1 October 2012 (UTC)

General

• Theres one dead link
  • YReplaced the link. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)

Infobox

• Is there a single cover?
  • Not that I could find, no. It is a bit unusual, but I don't think there was one.
• July 23, 2003 > July 26, 2003
  • YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)
• Mention the studios and locations in Recorded
  • YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)

Lead

• Mention the song's release date and record label
  • YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)
• Link [[Music journalism|music critics]]
  • YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)

Background and recording

• The album was > The song was
  • YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)

Composition

• Remove According to the sheet music published by Musicnotes.com, → Not needed
  • YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)
• You say "the song" a lot here. Replace some of them with "If We Are the Body" or "it"
  • YCut down total from 20 to 11. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)
• Link [[Refrain|chorus]]
  • YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)

Critical reception and accolades

• Link [[Music journalism|music critics]]
  • YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)
• Remove Mark Hall link. You've already linked the name in Background and recording.
  • YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)

Chart performance

• Remove self-titled debut album link
  • YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)

Live performances

• Link set list
  • YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)
• Casting performed > Casting Crowns performed
  • YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)
• setlist > set list
  • YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)

Credits and personnel

• No issues

Charts

• No issues

Release and radio history

• No issues

References

• FN2 – missing publisher
  • YFixed. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)
• FN4 – remove CCM Magazine and Salem Publishing links
  • YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)
• FN5 – fix dash
  • YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)
• FN6 – theres two dot points after Apple Inc
  • YFixed. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)
• FN9 – theres two dot points after the S in the author's name
  • YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)
• FN10 – remove the Christianity Today link
  • YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)
• FN11 – fix dash
  • YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)
• FN12 – use the "Cite news" template because the source is a newspaper article
  • YCitation was replaced so point is not relevant anymore. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)
• FN13 – fix dash
  • YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)
• FN14 – Fix dash. Also, remove Radio & Records and VNU Media links.
  • YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)
• FN15 – remove the Christianity Today link
  • YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)
• FN16 – Remove Billboard link. Also, publisher is missing.
  • YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)
• FN17 to FN22 – remove Billboard and Prometheus Global Media links
  • YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)
• FN23 – Remove Billboard and VNU Media links. Also, the original url is missing.
  • YDone, but the original url does not exist anymore. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)
• FN25 & FN26 – remove Jesus Freak Hideout links
  • YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)
• FN27 – use the "Cite news" template
  • YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)
• FN29 – use the "Cite news" template
  • YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)
• FN30 – fix dash
  • YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)
• FN31 to FN34 – remove Billboard and Prometheus Global Media links
  • YDone. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)

Summary

Great work! Article is well written. On hold for 7 days. — Oz (talk) 11:53, 3 October 2012 (UTC)

• I fixed the issues. Toa Nidhiki05 19:22, 4 October 2012 (UTC)
  • Passed. — Oz (talk) 20:51, 4 October 2012 (UTC)