Talk:Identitet/GA1

Latest comment: 4 years ago by Iaof2017 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 20:43, 2 May 2020 (UTC)Reply


Infobox

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  • You can ad more in the alt of the cover, its just not the performers in it
  • It is not "Folk-rock" → see below
  • Heavy rock is a style
@MarioSoulTruthFan: [1] Hard rock?--Lorik17 (talk) 21:41, 5 May 2020 (UTC)Reply
Yes, just redirect to that. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 22:01, 5 May 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • by Universal → Universal

Lead

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  • Are Bledar Sejko and Eda Sejko brothers or something?
@MarioSoulTruthFan: I think they are related but aren't mentioned as such in any source etc.--Lorik17 (talk) 19:57, 5 May 2020 (UTC)Reply
Fine then. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 21:34, 5 May 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • heavy folk-rock → not folk (see below)
  • three instrumentalists → there are four below?

Background and composition

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  • folk → not in any citation given (inspiration is not genre)
  • Heavy rock is a genre
  • Daily mirror is not a reliable source so you need to remove it along with all the information that goes with it
  • is also recalled through violins → is remembered through the use of violins

Plagiarism accusation

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  • "Plavi safir" → year of release
  • According to Sejko → which one of the two "Sejko"'s?

Promotion and music video

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  • Fine

Festivali i Këngës

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  • was chosen → were chosen

Malmö

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  • Adrian Lulgjuraj and Bledar Sejko was → Adrian Lulgjuraj and Bledar Sejko were
  • while pyrotechnics and fog including flames and fireworks are also used throughout the performance →so the flames and the fireworks are part of the fog? It should be be "were also used..."

Track listing

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  • Fine

Release history

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  • Fine

References

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  • Fine

Overall

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  • You should mention the relase of the single.   Not done → It's not on the body of the article
  • No critical reception?
@MarioSoulTruthFan: Added.--Lorik17 (talk) 20:20, 5 May 2020 (UTC)Reply
@Iaof2017: You just need to find the source for the digital download of the CD.
@MarioSoulTruthFan: This=[2]; its maybe suitable?--Lorik17 (talk) 22:09, 5 May 2020 (UTC)Reply
That's the CD I want the digital version with download. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 22:27, 5 May 2020 (UTC)Reply
@MarioSoulTruthFan: I found also this: [3] and this [4] but the latter was not archived.--Lorik17 (talk) 22:31, 5 May 2020 (UTC)Reply
The digital version is what I'm lookink for, if you can't find it, jsut remove it and don't forget to change the dates. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 23:14, 5 May 2020 (UTC)Reply
@MarioSoulTruthFan: done.--Lorik17 (talk) 23:17, 5 May 2020 (UTC)Reply