Talk:I går såg jag ditt barn, min Fröja/GA1

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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 08:09, 25 January 2022 (UTC)

Will do soon. AryKun (talk) 08:09, 25 January 2022 (UTC)

Many thanks. Chiswick Chap (talk) 08:26, 25 January 2022 (UTC)

• "best-known and best-loved songs" → This seems like an exceptional claim and isn't mentioned in the body.
  • Reworded.
• "based on a real event" → This is also not mentioned in the body.
  • Added.
• Link epistle.
  • One of Fredman's Epistles, already linked.
    • I meant a general link to what an epistle is.
• "Swedish song tradition" → Maybe just write "Swedish ballad tradition", as ballad and song aren't exact synonyms.
  • Done.
• "influence in Swedish music" → "influence on Swedish music"?
• Link epistle.
  • See above.
• Link pastorales.
  • Done.
• "post-baroque" → Shouldn't Baroque be capitalized? Also link.
  • Done.
• Link burlesque.
  • Done.
• Link timbres.
  • The link is something else; I've added a gloss.
• "Gamla stan" → Since this is a proper noun, is the italicization necessary?
  • Removed.
• Is "(song starts at 23:00)" needed in the external link, since it's a recording?
  • It'll certainly help readers as the place in the concert isn't at all obvious.
• All the references seem reliable and are properly formatted, although as they are all books/in Swedish, I can not verify them. AryKun (talk) 09:31, 25 January 2022 (UTC)
  • Many thanks. Chiswick Chap (talk) 09:40, 25 January 2022 (UTC)
• Just a sorta note: The article about the lady Ulla was based on states that she was arrested for wearing silk, so that might need to be checked out. AryKun (talk) 10:38, 25 January 2022 (UTC)