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I would suggest possibly adding a new section about the reception of the film, where you could put the quote from the Huffington Post, along with any other critical receptions of the special. Having one section just for the plot is good, and I think adding others would really strengthen the article.

In the first sentence of the plot section, I do not think "first black president" needs to be in quotation marks.

Maybe you could add a screenshot of the performance or any promotional images for the special, just to give the article a new dimension. Or even an image of Wanda Sykes herself somewhere.

Bcarignan (talk) 14:33, 5 December 2016 (UTC)bcarignanReply