Talk:I'm in Love Without You/GA1

Latest comment: 4 years ago by Lil-unique1 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Lil-unique1 (talk · contribs) 10:41, 22 June 2020 (UTC)Reply


Hello DarklyShadows, I'll review this within 7 days :) ≫ Lil-Unique1 -{ Talk }- 10:41, 22 June 2020 (UTC)Reply

Review

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Infobox

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Background and composition

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  • Credits are sourced to Tidal but there are no credits on tidal.
  • iTunes says the release date was September 1, 2017 not September 8.
  • iTunes lists the label as DRUP not OYOY.
  • The genre doesn't satisfy WP:GENRE, a "catch pop vocal topline with R&B flare" doesn't necessarily equate to the song being a pop song.
  • R&B flare doesn't equate to R&B influences in instrumentation - that's stretching things too far
  • Finneas tells Ones to Watch → Finneas told Ones to Watch, this isn't a live transcription, you are referring to an interview that has already happened.
  • You've quoted a mass of lyrics and cited them to the Coup de Main interview but they're not included in their. Its unusual and discouraged to cite lyrics directly from a song. This needs addressing.

Release history

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  • It wasn't just released in the US, see here.

Categories

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On the basis of [Wikipedia_talk:WikiProject_Albums#Ones_to_Watch this discussion], I'm failing the article. ≫ Lil-Unique1 -{ Talk }- 09:39, 25 June 2020 (UTC)Reply