Talk:Hurricane Patsy (1959)/GA1

Latest comment: 16 years ago by ThinkBlue in topic GA Review

GA Review

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GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


This article is in decent shape, but it needs more work before it becomes a Good Article.

  1. Is it well written?
    A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:  
    In the History section, this sentence ---> "The Japan Meteorological Agency's "best track" is missing a period.
    Check. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 16:22, 12 September 2008 (UTC)Reply
    B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:  
    Dates need to be un-linked, per here.
    Check. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 16:22, 12 September 2008 (UTC)Reply
  2. Is it verifiable with no original research, as shown by a source spot-check?
    A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:  
    B. Reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):  
    C. It contains no original research:  
    D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:  
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:  
    B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):  
  4. Is it neutral?
    It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:  
  5. Is it stable?
    It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:  
  6. Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
    A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:  
    B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:  
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:  
    If the following statements can be answered, I will pass the article. Good luck with improving this article!

--  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 19:52, 11 September 2008 (UTC)Reply

I have delinked the dates and completed the offending sentence. Unless you mistakenly added the sentence "If the following statements can be answered" to the review, in which case I have completed resolving your concerns, you need to tell me what the following statements are so I can finish resolving your concerns. Thank you. Miss Madeline | Talk to Madeline 23:50, 11 September 2008 (UTC)Reply
Well, I'm talking about the above stuff I left, I guess I should change "following statements" to "above stuff". Anyways, thank you to Miss Madeline for getting the "stuff" I left at the talk page, because I have gone off and placed the article as GA. Congrats. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 16:22, 12 September 2008 (UTC)Reply