Talk:Hurricane Ismael (1983)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 15:32, 16 June 2013 (UTC)

I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman 15:32, 16 June 2013 (UTC)

Here are the issues I found:

• "Continuing to intensity," to intensify
  •  Done. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 02:52, 18 June 2013 (UTC)
• "a 20-year old woman was swept away when off rocks" a bit confusing, reword
  •  Done. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 02:52, 18 June 2013 (UTC)

That's all I found, easy to fix, article on hold. Wizardman 02:44, 18 June 2013 (UTC)

• • Thanks for the review. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane}

    No problem. Looks good, article passes. Wizardman 04:28, 18 June 2013 (UTC)