Talk:Horizon chart

Lead paragraph

In the lead paragraph you define the horizon chart as a '2-dimensional data visualization'. I would call it 2-dimensional data visualization method. Gps1810 (talk) 12:51, 7 July 2023 (UTC)

Overview paragraph

When the building of the horizon chart is described, you are basically assuming that your dataset has 'negative values'. Does it mean that when this is not the case this data visualization method cannot be applied? If so I guess this should be directly stated. I would also say that the data analysis cannot be helped by any plot, whatever the method is. The analysis comes before the visualization stage... Instead, for sure these plots help the data interpretation. Gps1810 (talk) 12:55, 7 July 2023 (UTC)

Chart construction paragraph

The link to the 'Euclidean origin' should be put the first time the origin is mentioned, at the beginning of the paragraph.

Gps1810 (talk) 13:09, 7 July 2023 (UTC)

General comment

The article is comprehensible and well written. The figures are clear and convey the message. I would suggest to add some examples of fields where this kind of data visualization method is regularly used. Gps1810 (talk) 13:11, 7 July 2023 (UTC)

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