Talk:Horace Moore-Jones/GA1
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Reviewer: CPA-5 (talk · contribs) 20:18, 8 September 2019 (UTC)
I claim this one. After I finish USS Takanis Bay and German torpedo boat T35 I will do this one. Probably within a couple of days I will start this one. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 20:18, 8 September 2019 (UTC)
- Born in Malvern Wells, Worcestershire, England Link Worcestershire.
- and a school teacher, Sarah Ann Garner No née?
- a relationship with Dobson and the two married Dobson who?
- careers as artists, settling in Sydney Unlink Sydney.
- Dobson, who had trained for a time at the Royal Academy in London Unlink London.
- with the Art Society of New South Wales Link New South Wales.
- remarried in 1905, to Florence Mitchell No néé?
- time of the outbreak of the First World War Link WWI.
- he joined up with the main body of the NZEF in Egypt Pipe Egypt to the Sultanate of Egypt.
- upon on the plateau where Lieutenant Colonel Arthur Plugge established Lieutenant Colonel needs a hyphen.
- Section, which was attached to Lieutenant General William Birdwood's Same as above with Lieutenant General.
- at Gallipoli, as well as Major General Alexander Godley Same as above with Major General.
- the five-metre high statue, mounted No English units?
- donated by the Turkish government and sourced --> "donated by the Turkish Government and sourced".
- No edit wars.
Infobox
- Looks good to me.
Sources
- The "Bronze statue honours war artist" says it was published on 27 March 2015 instead of 28th.
- The rest looks good to me.
- No ORs.
- The sources are reliable of high quality.
Images
- Looks good to me. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 12:37, 11 September 2019 (UTC)
- CPA-5 Thanks for the review. I have actioned all of the above, except some country/city links. It is my preference to not link countries but to link cities. This is s a consequence of feedback of reviewers on past articles I have taken to GA/A-Class. Zawed (talk) 09:17, 12 September 2019 (UTC)