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Latest comment: 14 years ago by Theleftorium in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: The Flash I am Jack's complete lack of surprise 04:41, 2 April 2010 (UTC)Reply

Hi. I'll be reviewing this article as part of the April GAN Backlog Elimination Drive. This article is in great shape, but until the below minor issues are fixed, I'm placing it on hold. The Flash I am Jack's complete lack of surprise 04:41, 2 April 2010 (UTC)Reply

Lead

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  • It'd be better if you include what number the episode is overall (i.e., "...and the 26th episode overall")

Plot

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  • Wikilink $ to US Dollar.
  • "as long as he likes" → "as long as he desires"
  • In the last paragraph: "a much-anticipated boxing match in which Drederick Tatum will challenge for the World Heavyweight Championship." Do you mean fight for the Championship?
  • "[...]all of his friends to come over and watch[...]" -> "over to watch"
    • That would cause repetition of the word "to". Theleftorium 09:27, 3 April 2010 (UTC)Reply

Production

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  • Is that Moses picture really necessary?
  • In the DVD commentary for "The Homer They Fall," I seem to recall Weinstein saying that Tatum was named after a kid he knew in school. Am I correct?

Cultural references

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  • In stead of "looks exactly like Don King," I say it should be worded, "strongly resembles Don King"
  • Burns is not mentioned in the plot, so wikilink to his name.
  • The bit about the films they watch should be before the Broadcast News reference.

Reception

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  • Nodda. Nice work.

Images

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  • Two PD images, on FU image which seems fine.

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