Talk:History of Liverpool F.C. (1985–present)/GA1
Latest comment: 11 years ago by TBrandley in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 05:20, 17 November 2012 (UTC)
I myself am a Chelsea fan, but nevertheless, will still be reviewing the article. TBrandley 05:51, 18 November 2012 (UTC)
- Don't use words like "current" per WP:RELTIME
- Same goes for "present"
- Link "Liverpool" in lede image per WP:REPEATLINK
- Check for your consistency with numbers, in one you say "fifth" and in another you say "18th", please check and fix per WP:MOSNUM
- "The team improved under Evans" change to "The team improved when Evans was the team's manager" for prose
- "At the start of the 2010–11 season Liverpool" missing comma after "season"
- "Liverpool started the season" which season? It isn't noted before in this section.
- "At the start of the 1986–87 season it" missing comma after "season"
- "but they were" change to "but were" for prose
- "At the end of the season Dalglish" missing comma again, please check
- "he only won three of" remove "only" per WP:NPOV
- "the Kop" isn't real name "Spion Kop", as done in image caption, note there please
- "by Union of European Football Associations (UEFA)" usually meets WP:ACRO, but in this case, hasn't "UEFA" already been mentioned firstly above, and therefore after should be referred by the short name, in this case, "UEFA". If not, only the actual name should linked, without the bracket short name
- "£8.5" it is the UK pound obviously, but should be noted anyway as the pound, if some don't know
- Link "West Ham United" in image per WP:REPEATLINK
- "British Broadcasting Corporation" should not be spelled out fully per WP:ACRO guideline
- Some references are missing parameters, like ref. 50, it is missing accessdate, and they could be more, like authors, etc., please check all. It was only that one I think though.
- Why is the location parameter only used for some The Guardian sources? Should be used with all news sources, including this one, all per WP:CITE
- Any external links?
Overall; very good job. Once the above issues are addressed, I will pass the article based on the good article criteria. Well done! TBrandley 05:51, 18 November 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks for taking the time to review this TBrandley. I'm currently in Australia without permanent acess to a computer, but I'll try and fix these issues over the coming days. NapHit (talk) 06:20, 23 November 2012 (UTC)
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