Talk:Hill 303 massacre/GA1
Latest comment: 13 years ago by Woody in topic GA Review
GA Review edit
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Reviewer: Woody (talk) 19:43, 15 September 2010 (UTC)
Criteria edit
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
- Is it reasonably well written?
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. References to sources:
- B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- B. Focused:
- A. Major aspects:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- All US-Army free licences
- B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
- Suitable captions, alt text provided.
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- Overall:
Jargon questions edit
In "Korean War begins" it says "after the defeat of Task Force Smith" but nowhere is it explained what Task Force Smith is.Jargon: again in the "begins" section: "They advanced on UN positions with armor and superior numbers" Could you reword to avoid the use of armor, perhaps explain it on the first instance, or link Armoured warfare somewhere. My point is that the uninitiated reading this article won't know what armor is staight away.In "imprisonment:" "heavy artillery preparations pounded" what are heavy artillery preparations?