Talk:High School Musical: The Musical: The Series/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 13:25, 13 April 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 13:25, 13 April 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Per the template, genres need sources.
• The "list_episodes" parameter is unnecessary per infobox television.
• Runtime also needs a source.
• In the lead, add a serial comma after Mark St. Cyr.
• Also add a serial comma after "ABC".

• Done. I did my best at sources for the genres and runtime. SatDis (talk) 01:47, 17 April 2021 (UTC)

Premise / Cast and characters

• Considering the Casting has become rather complicated with Season 3 I decided to make a Draft:List of High School Musical: The Musical: The Series cast members. Some information may be incorrect or incomplete due to season 4 being still in production. Thoughts?

Episodes

• "practise" → "practice" (consistency with article)
• "implores for the" → "implores the"
• Remove the commas after "separating" and "romantic moment".
• There appears to be a word missing between "prevent her overthinking".
• "The cast discover" → "The cast discovers"
• Per MOS:TVPLOT, plot summaries should be "no more than 200 words per episode"

Episode three is at 206 words.

Episode seven is at 208 words.

Episode ten is at 206 words.

• Done. All episodes are now under 200 words. SatDis (talk) 01:47, 17 April 2021 (UTC)

Production

• "which depicted" → "that depicted"
• Remove the comma after "commenced in February 2020".
• "present day" → "present-day"
• Add a serial comma after Howard Ashman.
• The quote in the reference after "idea for a series" doesn't seem necessary.
• The phrase "write drafts of a script" sounds wordy, so try rewording.
• The last sentence in the second paragraph seems out of place. Try moving it to the first.

• Done. SatDis (talk) 01:47, 17 April 2021 (UTC)

Release

• Fix the [better source needed] issue.
• Add a serial comma after "ABC".
• "labelled" → "labeled"
• Add a comma after "January 17, 2020" per WP:DATECOMMA.
• Per WP:TRAILER, #Marketing should not simply list when trailers were released, but reactions people had to them.

• I have decided to remove the "Marketing" section as I don't believe it is necessary. SatDis (talk) 01:47, 17 April 2021 (UTC)

Reception

• Excellent #Critical_response section! Not too many quotes, which passes WP:RECEPTION.
• Accolades is missing a Artios Awards nomination.
• Also, shouldn't the nominees column be after "category"?

• Wow, thanks for the feedback! Usually my "Critical response" section isn't up to scratch. Thanks for finding the nomination, fixed. SatDis (talk) 01:47, 17 April 2021 (UTC)

References

• The Futon Critic can be archived using archive.today.
• PopSugar is not reliable, so I would remove/replace it.
• Mark references from Los Angeles Times with "|url-access=limited".

• Thanks for the tips. Fixed. SatDis (talk) 01:47, 17 April 2021 (UTC)

Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Response

• Addressing suggestions now. SatDis (talk) 00:49, 17 April 2021 (UTC)
• @Some Dude From North Carolina: All suggestions addressed above. Thanks so much for the review. Please let me know if there are any further suggestions. SatDis (talk) 01:47, 17 April 2021 (UTC)