Talk:Harold B. Lee Library/GA1

Latest comment: 16 years ago by Eustress in topic GA Review

GA Review

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  • It looks odd in the references section to have external links pointing to the magazine's homepage. I'd just have them without the link; the URL provided to the page being cited should suffice.
  • Done. I removed the external link to the HBLL, as it is already included in the infobox. I think the link to Special Collections is still useful, though. Thanks. --Eustress (talk) 15:07, 31 May 2008 (UTC)Reply
  • "However, the Lewis building (where Maeser's office was located) burned down in 1884, the fire also destroyed the library collection." - the however is awkward her, and an "and" would make it read better after the comma I think.
  • The history section has a few unsourced paragraphs.
  • "By 1950, the collection had long since" - sounds awkward, some redundancy...