Talk:Harder to Breathe/GA1

GA Review

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Starting review. Jezhotwells (talk) 19:53, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

Quick fail criteria assessment

1. The article completely lacks reliable sources – see Wikipedia:Verifiability.

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2. The topic is treated in an obviously non-neutral way – see Wikipedia:Neutral point of view.

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3. There are cleanup banners that are obviously still valid, including cleanup, wikify, NPOV, unreferenced or large numbers of fact, clarifyme, or similar tags.

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4. The article is or has been the subject of ongoing or recent, unresolved edit wars.

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5. The article specifically concerns a rapidly unfolding current event with a definite endpoint.

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No problems with quick fail criteria, moving to main review. Jezhotwells (talk) 19:56, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

Checking against GA criteria

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose):

   • It is reasonably well written, although there is room for improvement, I made some copy edits to improve grammar and comprehension. Jezhotwells (talk) 22:38, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

   b (MoS):

   • Complies Jezhotwells (talk) 22:38, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references):

   • References all check out. Jezhotwells (talk) 22:47, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

   b (citations to reliable sources):

   • Sources appear reliable Jezhotwells (talk) 22:43, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

   c (OR):

   • No OR Jezhotwells (talk) 22:43, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

3. It is broad in its scope.

   a (major aspects):

   • Broad....

   b (focused):

   • and focussed/ Jezhotwells (talk)

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars etc.:

   • Stable Jezhotwells (talk) 22:43, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):

   • Image used is tagged and has a fir use rationale. Jezhotwells (talk) 22:47, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

   • Appropriate and captioned. Jezhotwells (talk) 22:47, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

   • No problems, GA status, Congratulations. Jezhotwells (talk) 22:47, 23 June 2009 (UTC)