Talk:Harajuku Lovers Live/GA1

Latest comment: 14 years ago by Legolas2186 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: --Legolas (talk2me) 03:55, 10 November 2009 (UTC)Reply

Hello. I will be reviewing this article for the GA criterias. First of all I will be reviewing against quick-fail criterias.

Prose

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Verifiability

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Fixed -- EA Swyer Talk Contributions 15:23, 17 November 2009 (UTC)Reply
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Fixed -- EA Swyer Talk Contributions 15:28, 17 November 2009 (UTC)Reply

GA review

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GA review (see here for criteria)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
    Remove reference 4 to Rotten Tomatoes, those are by users and not professional. Done
    Reference 21, please make the [] brackets as {}. Then the reference won't be broken. Done
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
    The image HollabackGirl.jpg needs to be made right as per MOS:IMAGES. Also please add alternate text for the images as per WP:ALT.
    Done both. The alt text on hollabackgirl was broken.
    Mmmmm still not exactly satisfied with the alt text. Expecially the two performance pictures doesnot give any info other than the blond lady singing in the microphone. Try Sticky & Sweet Tour and check how they added the alternate text. --Legolas (talk2me) 05:13, 24 November 2009 (UTC)Reply
    How is that? I didn't know alt-text was supposed to be so detailed. -- EA Swyer Talk Contributions 13:47, 24 November 2009 (UTC)Reply
    It is supposed to give the reader who can't see the image, as much information as possible regarding the image. --Legolas (talk2me) 03:36, 25 November 2009 (UTC)Reply
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Over all a good article. We are almost there. --Legolas (talk2me) 09:56, 23 November 2009 (UTC)Reply

Fixed what you brought up. Thanks for the review. -- EA Swyer Talk Contributions 13:29, 23 November 2009 (UTC)Reply
We are ready to roll :) --Legolas (talk2me) 09:12, 1 December 2009 (UTC)Reply