Talk:HMS Shannon (1906)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Ed! (talk · contribs) 02:29, 11 December 2012 (UTC)

• The image was recently tampered with by an IP. I reverted. If there was some edit intended on the image it should be changed.
• Also, is there a year on that photo?
  • Added to the caption.
• "She began a refit shortly afterwards that lasted until 24 January 1915." -- Any idea what was fixed in this refit?
  • Nothing specified; probably just the usual repair work and upgrades.
• "During the Battle of Jutland on 31 May 1916, she was not heavily engaged..." -- this sounds somewhat vague, like she could have been in the middle of the fight, and just not shot at, or she could have been far away. Clarify, please, maybe where she was relative to the battle.
  • Done.
• In references but not used: Brown 2003 and Chesneau/Kolesnik 1979
• Infobox looks good, lead looks good, other than these few comments everything else seems to check out. Will be back. —Ed!^(talk) 02:33, 11 December 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for your review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 06:02, 11 December 2012 (UTC)