Talk:HMS Prize/GA1

Latest comment: 5 years ago by Zawed in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 17:30, 2 March 2019 (UTC)Reply


I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:30, 2 March 2019 (UTC)Reply

  • No DABs
  • The license for the painting is incorrect. Should be PD-Art, although I don't know what else might apply. Ask users Nikkimaria or Fae for help with the licensing if you're not familiar with licensing tags for art.
  • The other image is appropriately licensed.
  • Can you pin down where the EV Smit & Zoon shipyard is, according to a reliable source?
  • Have added the town where the firm was based. Zawed (talk) 09:01, 20 March 2019 (UTC)Reply
  • Can you find a source that confirms that UB-48 sank the Prize?
  • Howard is a lot more explicit than Bridgland on the sinking, and even refers to the UB-48's log. I have revised this section based on that. Zawed (talk) 09:01, 20 March 2019 (UTC)Reply
  • Can you find the name of the gunboat that captured her?
  • Yes, Howard had that too. Zawed (talk) 09:01, 20 March 2019 (UTC)Reply
  • It was fired at 30 times by the U-boat as it approached awkward--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:00, 19 March 2019 (UTC)Reply
  • I have rephrased that sentence and the following one, hopefully it is much less awkward now. I will have to go to the library to get the main source (Grant) and resolve your other comments. I hope to do that tomorrow. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 07:38, 19 March 2019 (UTC)Reply
  • I was able to hold of Howard today, and have made some changes as a result. I think I have addressed everything now. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 09:01, 20 March 2019 (UTC)Reply