Talk:HMS Hannibal (1896)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 01:18, 1 August 2015 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:18, 1 August 2015 (UTC)

• No DABs or external links.
• Images appropriately licensed.
• Need |ship power line with ihp and number of boilers
• Use the link I gave you for the VTE engines in both the infobox and main body.
• Watch your conversions and probably a digit too many in the infobox
• Just a suggestion, but you could streamline the torpedo tube data in the infobox.
• Link cylindrical boilers, depot ship.
• relieved by first-class protected cruiser Missing "the"
• Hannibal was placed on the disposal list at Alexandria in January 1920, and was sold for scrapping on 28 January 1920. She was scrapped in Italy. Combine these two sentences.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 21:02, 12 August 2015 (UTC)
  • Think I've got them all. Thanks Sturm. Parsecboy (talk) 12:23, 13 August 2015 (UTC)