Talk:HMS Formidable (67)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Tomobe03 (talk · contribs) 09:01, 12 April 2014 (UTC)

I'll get to this review shortly.--Tomobe03 (talk) 09:01, 12 April 2014 (UTC)

• No disambiguation links found (no action required)
• All external links are in order (no action required)
• There are several duplicate links in the article, which should be removed per WP:OVERLINK. Those are: smoke screen, HMS Victorious (R38), HMS Indomitable (92), and Dutch East Indies.
• All images have appropraite licenses, sourcing and captions. (no action required)
• There is an image in the "Footnotes" section - which I find an odd choice of placement, but no dealbreaker here. I though to point that out in case that is unintentional.
• The prose claims there were six Admiralty 3-drum boliers, while the infobox indicates there were eight of them. I assume one of the numbers is off, but which one?
• Similarly, the prose indicates that "Her complement was approximately 1,299 officers and enlisted men ..." while the infobox cites 1,229. I expect one typo there somewhere.

I finished reading through the article, and have nothing to add to the above issues. Few overlinkings and two mismatches between the prose and the infobox to address. Cheers.--Tomobe03 (talk) 14:13, 19 April 2014 (UTC)

All done, thanks for looking through this.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:13, 21 April 2014 (UTC)

You're welcome. Passing now - the article makes a really good reading material, as usual.--Tomobe03 (talk) 12:51, 21 April 2014 (UTC)