Talk:HEATH

I like the amount of information in the article but I would look at the advanced settings of the text box and change the headings so that the page looks a little bit cleaner. I didn't see any violations of NPOV/NOR but there are no citations, so I would add some of those. A picture of the cover of the book would also be nice. Cappy8118 (talk) 22:06, 6 October 2015 (UTC)

Comments

Jxu2881

• Remember that your topic is "Heath", not Tan Lin. I'm currently writing the article for Tan Lin so though I can verify that the information you've presented is correct, Wikipedia would only allow for a brief blurb on Lin before hyperlinking to the main article regarding Lin and his other works.
• The way the article is formatted is very odd, and honestly, I can't figure it out. First, use four equals signs on either side of the title to create subheadings rather than the italicized bulleted list you currently have. Next, I can't tell if these italicized blurbs are part of Heath or some of Lin's other works. Be sure to use the intro paragraph to explain this further if they are, in fact, subsections of 'HEATH'.
• If I recall correctly, the full name of the book is "HEATH(Plagiarism/Outsource)" according to my sources, rather than just "HEATH".
• Fix formatting and use double brackets like so to hyperlink to other Wikipedia articles.