Talk:H.A.T.E.U./GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 00:39, 3 October 2015 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:39, 3 October 2015 (UTC)

When you're ready.  — Calvin999 11:04, 9 October 2015 (UTC)

• No DABs.
• External links good.
• The background section doesn't really cover the background, but rather the performance. Is there any info on the origin of the song or why she decided to do it?
  • I've re-titled it as Production.  — Calvin999 19:04, 10 October 2015 (UTC)
• Copyright 2009 Rye Songs which is administered by Songs of Universal (BMI)/WB Music Publishing (ASCAP/Songs of Peer/March 9 Publishing (ASCAP). Why is this here?
  • We tend to include management and publishing info now.  — Calvin999 19:04, 10 October 2015 (UTC)
    • Really? No such info in your recent GA for Infinity.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 13:38, 11 October 2015 (UTC)
      • That isn't now. I can remove it if you want. But I've noticed that other editors are including it now.  — Calvin999 21:07, 11 October 2015 (UTC)
• albums initial release Missing possessive apostrophe.
  • Added.  — Calvin999 19:04, 10 October 2015 (UTC)
    • and here: the albums third single and there are later examples as well.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 13:38, 11 October 2015 (UTC)
• A low quality snippet Add a hyphen between low and quality. More later.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:01, 10 October 2015 (UTC)
  • Added.  — Calvin999 19:04, 10 October 2015 (UTC)
• Was it released or did it chart outside the US? If so, add that info.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 13:38, 11 October 2015 (UTC)
  • It wasn't and didn't, else I would have added that info.  — Calvin999 10:08, 13 October 2015 (UTC)

Any chance of this progressing please?  — Calvin999 21:30, 17 October 2015 (UTC)

Non-reviewer comments

• "described the song as 'notable'" isn't really informative. I'd mention that Fekadu called the song as "a beautiful heartbreak ballad"
• "was critical of Carey's vocal performance" → "criticized Carey's vocals"
• It could help to add some critical commentary on the performances as the "live performances" section is quite short
  • There isn't any. I couldn't even source other Live performances. It was a very minimal promoted, charted and commented on single.  — Calvin999
• Not really sure a "charts" section is really warranted with only one entry, but is definitely worth discussing in prose within the "Release and remixes" section either way.
  • I opted for a table over prose.  — Calvin999 19:19, 18 October 2015 (UTC)

Left this on behalf of review's request. Snuggums (talk / edits) 00:15, 18 October 2015 (UTC)